As for the negative reviews, I understand their points. Just like what I have said before, I am also against **** and I am not writing this Novel to trivialize ****. All of you know that I started this because of the original SB story. Although, this novel is supposed to have a bad end but majority doesn't want that. So I decided to make this a story of second chance since the ML's kinda a rapist.
It's not like it's my choice to make LYF the ML since the ML in the original SB is the king who raped SB. Since I'm basing this story there, I have to make him the ML.
Although I admit that some characters will have some mental disorders like Bordeline Personality disorder, Possessive personality disorder, Stockholm syndrome, antisocial personality disorder, obsessive love disorder, etc. a lot of complicated mental issues... LYF, LXY, LBB, XM, BXY, and some other characters i will not mention. I think it's because I'm watching too much of Criminal Minds? XD
I know that the start of this story is fast paced and there isn't much description in it, I did said that I was planning to make this story short, around 20 chapters but as you can see, this novel has exceeded that since I've decided to make it longer. Question: Are the chapters still going fast paced? I don't really know since it's going okay for me, maybe because I'm the one who wrote it? But I want to know my readers perspective on it.
I'm not forcing anyone to read this story so I'm kind of sad that some people give this story a review just by reading the synopsis or maybe reading a few chapters. I guess some are just quick to judge but I'll ignore them.
I know that I am not a good writer, I am an amateur writer. I'm not really good in describing things and my vocabulary is limited XD Although, I want to improve, I don't have much time to restudy my english lessons because of my subjects this sem is hard enough to get me busy.
Aside from that, I may not notice any grammatical mistakes since my knowledge is limited that's why I'm searching for an editor to at least help me fill up my holes in describing things and help me correct my grammatical mistakes.
I'm still thinking and deciding if I should put this story on hold to rewrite the first parts but... i currently don't have that much time. Maybe I'll rewrite it once this novel has reached a 100 chapters or maybe once vacation will start (which is still on May XD)
I guess that's all I want you all to know for now. Will make another Author's thoughts if I have something else in mind.
I'm really grateful for all the readers that supported this novel. Thank you continuously reading it until the latest chapters. ♡(∩o∩)♡
PS. I'll be updating two chapters later since I don't have any quizzes today.