Starting the tutorial with two bodies Chapter 71

Hey everyone, I’ve decided to rewrite this story for a bunch of reasons. One of them is that I felt it wasn’t developing the way I wanted, especially in the early chapters. On top of that, there are a lot of things I want to change. To be honest, I already have some chapters rewritten that barely relate to the original beginning of the story. So I thought, “Since I’m already doing this, why not take the chance to basically rewrite almost everything?” Find the newest release on novel{f}ire.net When I say “rewrite,” I actually mean I’m going to cut out what didn’t work and improve other parts of the narrative. This process should take less than a month, since a good portion of the chapters are already done. Don’t worry—I’ll post the new version here as soon as it’s ready, including a brand-new cover made just for it. I hope you’ll keep following the story, because I’ll do my best to make it even better than the first version!